11/7/09: sky

walked to library today. saw the sky. it was light purple and orange near the horizon. farther up, white and pale gray and finally purple-blue overhead. thought it was beautiful. wondered if anyone else noticed.

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  1. jonathan

     /  November 8, 2009

    This is an experimental piece (as you can probably tell). Did you find it confusing, overly simplistic, stupid, or unattractive? Please, tell me your reaction. Would you like to see more of this?

    My fellow writers: what is your opinion? Maybe you liked it. Maybe you didn’t. Maybe you’re not sure yet. Maybe you’re thinking, “Please, just STOP!” (Send me a private Facebook message if you’re more comfortable with that.)

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  2. …no comment as to the style…but the sky was quite beautiful. lol.

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  3. Anonymous

     /  November 9, 2009

    there can sometimes be a million thoughts and a million responces wrapped into a simple, concise sentence. it leaves room. the more space for periods, the more space for contemplation. switching it up is good, but only if it is what you want. write for others, but do not forget yourself. in forgetting yourself, you forget the reason for writing. communication only means something if the person means something who is doing the communicating. write how YOU want to write. it really is the only thing/way worth writing.

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  4. D'Arcy

     /  November 9, 2009

    ooops.. that was my post/very first comment.. didnt know it wouldnt put who it was.. 🙂

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  5. Martha

     /  November 9, 2009

    It made me wish I had seen the sky on Saturday night. :)good change up. Communication is always better then no communication.

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  6. Kelly

     /  November 9, 2009

    hmm where to begin?

    -i don’t know if it’s me and my uber creative imagination, but i got a very nice visual (which is one of my fav parts of reading, allowing myself to “see” what the author is saying)

    -i thought this style was charming and beautiful. i’ve seen this style attempted and failed several times. i must say this is a pass

    -i would totally be fine with seeing more like this, but first and foremost i’d like to see what you want to write. the best art (writings, drawings, music…etc) comes from one’s soul. when you feel a piece…now that is the best work one can make. (was that a lil too weird? haha)

    -to me, bundy, everything you write is beautiful….so write what you have on your heart, or try a new style for fun. odds are i’ll love it

    uhhh totally long, sorry hehee

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